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This is one of the essay I wrote for IELTS writing task 2 in my preparation class. Please do not copy for your homework or any assignments because I can not make sure that this essay is "completely" use right grammar or well-organized as I just practice by my own. Do not mind to ask or advice for my essay in the comment box below!
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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion!
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Many people think that stay in the same company will bring benefits to their career. However, some people also believe that it can hinder their career journey and start to move into different company.
One of the reasons why people trying to keep stay at the some company all their life is because their salary and hopes for promotion. It is true that loyalties over one company will help their career development and influence their salary. Some people also get to promote and manage to reach higher position. But, for those people who did not get to promote and already worked for several years, they should try to consider moves into different field or company. Remain in a job for too long can also led into losing the ability to effectively compete against new comers, lose the purpose and excitement in job and decrease the quality of work performance.
Changing jobs will risk some people but it can also give them great advantage in their career path. For example, they might find a job that offers better salary, develop their skill and they can also get a lot of connections. Many people get benefit as a new employee while they can negotiate their salary based on their skills and experiences and they can learn new skill in a new role at the company. When they enter new environment, they also can get to make connection that can also help in their career.
In my view, changing jobs is better option when we can not get what we were wanted and hoped in the old company. Even there are some risk that could happens, exploring new career will enhance the work performance, gives a chance to get better salary and also new connection that can help to develop their career.
Cheers!💟
